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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: One Rose = L.O.V.E. /chapter 1

    This is really good, I actually want to read more! But I would like to give you a little advice. Since this is narrated, try using dashes instead of parenthesis ...

    Aug 15, 2013


Journeys end in lovers' meeting.
— William Shakespeare