Lorraine

There are plenty of really beautiful sentences, and they made your writing very charming :) For example... (“Alright—Susie I—” he paused, his eyes searching the sky for words. They weren’t ...

Thanks Chocoholic, I tried to improve it. Still a bit uncertain of when to tell you the gender of "James"... So I let the cat say it out loud...uh. Yes, ...

So one day, I was inspired by Neil Gaiman's short story, "The Case of the Four and Twenty Blackbirds" and decided to play around with nursery rhymes. This is the ...

I really like the way you describe feelings and motion. I agree with GML too---reading something longer written by you would be nice. There's something poetic in here, and it ...

Thank you. I think I'll probably set it in a place I'm familiar with. Sam: Chicken soup? The Chinese have chicken soup but is that different from the United States? ...

Hi, am I putting this in the right place? Um...I'm writing a story about some little's girls street life in a city, a girl who has been abandoned a a ...

I think this is going to be an interestingly enchanting story. I like the way you started and the part with Mr. Richards and the officer. Nice characterization with Miss ...

A special way to tell a story. Great! I really like the story idea-creative and very lively. To me, the whole piece still has space to work on, for example ...

Hi, this is my first reply. Sorry for not really knowing how... I enjoyed this piece and felt excited reading it. The atmosphere was good and it attracted me, but ...

Rebbecca: I will really enjoy this place! Chelsi: Used to think most of the people here are from America, but seems not!! We feel real bad about the quake, but ...

Hi Chelsi, I'm new too and within 3 days, I found this place warm and wonderful! Have a good time here!

Chinnie, well, Sa Ateko=) What kind of writing do you like?

I'm glad you liked Hong kong(I don't often take the MTR--it's too crowded) Gahks: Great to meet a Chinese person!! You speak Cantonese?? I used to read Neil Gaiman but ...

Chinnie: I've tried learning Tagalog before...Kumusta ka? I've learnt to sing the song about vegetables! Have a great time here^^

Chocoholic: You did Chinese! Wow...I always thought it's hard for people from other countries to learn Chinese. Especially the writing style, you know. I'm glad you love learning about our ...