Lornthalas

Oh and by the way, your avatar is freakin' awesome! I always enjoy the company of other LOTR fans! and thanks again for the great read!

Thanks, all criticism is welcome! Anything can have the potential to help me become a better writer and your advice is far from harsh! Thanks friend.

Well, I've updated it. Eh, sorry about how long it took me and about the sort of plot change there. I was between ideas when I wrote it, and, well, ...

will try it

Thanks, I originally had it organized into 4-Line Stanzas, but the computer changes 'em to that paragraph thingy when I submit it%u2026I'm trying to work that problem out at the ...

Thanks for the suggestions! I will try to work on them soon.