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Re: Eight Siblings: Could You Handle This?
Hello there, I will be posting my reviews in a generalized manner so i wouldn't sound too redundant. A. Grammar There are four things I have to say for you: ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: The legend of Leo: Chapter 1
Hello everyone! :D This is practically my first story in YWS, and my first novel as well, in need of a desperate and well done critiques for the better improvement ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: Time is gone, it stops who it wants
Hi there, here's what I got to say for you: :D Now, as the first days melted into weeks, blooming in months and still progressing on. I still miss you. ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: It's our love story
Hi there! Before anything else, I would like to add some critiques first: One would have thought a girl would be prepared in the moment a gorgous guy It should ...
Apr 29, 2009