Lorens_01

Thank for your criticisms once more! I'll try to improve this in the near future. :)

Thank you for all of your constructive criticisms. :D Again, fell free to demolish my story to make the best review out of it, ;)

Johannes Arzland was an Irish national with his blue eyes which dreams boundless like the blue sea, a golden blonde hair as wealthy as the future ahead of him and ...

I. Just. Have. To. Say. This piece didn't work for me. I didn't read a lot of it, so maybe I might not be the best of reviewers but... The ...

Yay, a fellow Pinoy! ;)Thank you for the review! I admit; I suck at grammar and I would really appreciate it if you would tell me. Anyway, I'll try to ...

Yup! :) Thank you for the compliment as well. I read my story again and you are right, there are parts which needs revision. I'll go over them sometime. I ...

I hope you'll like my story, :) For You in Full Blossom “Sakura, have you joined any clubs yet?” Cherry asked with a touch of concern for her friend. It ...

Hi! I would like to agree the the post above me. If the pregnant part and the gay part was also explored the story would have rocked! That was just ...

Thank you for the reviews. I would find time to edit this chapter sometime in the future. The sentence structure has some flaws so I'll try to make up for ...

Hi Ma'am or Miss Hannah! I'm kinda nervous to ask you to review my work since I am new, and I would be more than honored if you would grace ...

Hi there! I won't go over grammar pointing since some of the reviewers already dealt with it, I'll focus more on the story plot. 1. Stretch things up: There are ...

Hi there, obviously I'm here for your review, so here it goes! Hope you won't take anything I say bad at yourself, this is just to help you improve yourself ...

Thanks for the advice Dark Sploosh , you'll know soon enough why this is a gender blender. Elentari , thanks for the comment as well, I just posted the second ...

Here is the link for chapters: Chapter 1 Hi guys, thank you for all of you who reviewed my work. Here is part two of my novel, please give it ...

Thank you for reviewing my work brainychic212 and DSF! Apparently, I reread my story and said, "Gosh! What they said is true! " Thanks for pointing out my weak points. ...