Lordofkittys

Thanks for the review! A lot of your critiques were great and would really help the story. It really was a fantastic review!

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Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback!

Thanks a thousands times over! I hope you have a wonderful day as well!

Cool, thanks for the help! I will definitely be looking at revising the story some more.

Thanks for the review. I think a lot of your criticism is quite valid. Rereading that third paragraph did make me realize a lot of that info is practically repeated ...

I have a few things that I am already a bit skeptical of. For one, I am not entirely sure how I feel about the names as they seem maybe ...

Thanks for the advice! I will admit my grammar skills are quite bad, and I only gave this a few quick glance overs. A lot of your points are very ...