Loozle

You know, I had forgotten I had written this! I'm just about to change it up a bit.. But, anyway, before I start rambling on, and making this sentence too ...

Up

Oo, hm, yes, yes. *sets down lenseless glasses and smiles* I liked this. If one thing is certain, though, I can't critique to save my life. Not that there was ...

Hey, thanks for the reviews. =] Yeah, I sort of noticed some slight similarities with this and Stargirl, (thought I don't know where you're getting the EXACTLY part. =P) But ...

Heart

(Ok, so this isn't enough to even count for anything, but this is a little intro to something I'm working on.) Mona caught my eye the minute I saw her, ...

Ahh, I forgot about reading this! Well, it's a good thing I logged on for a change, now, isn't it? This is incredibly cute, and resembles my house, except the ...

Jack

I love these characters that you have written, they're whimsical but still realistic, which is probably what you were aiming for. I am all over this story right now. =] ...

Oo, liking it. I don't really see anything wrong with this.. So hoo-to-the-ray for you. I'm definitely going to be keeping up on this. -Eme