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Loozle

  • Other Poetry Re: Pancakes

    Tehe.. this is so cute! It made me laugh, so theres a plus. I loved this, and couldn't find anything wrong with it. (That hasn't been said. Rhyming and what ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]

    Umm.. 7/10. I don't really get it, but it made me smile.

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Welcome

    Thanks, I did switch it up, tried to clarify things a bit. =]

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Ask a stupid question...

    You check the dictionary. Why are the greeters at Walmart so old?

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Welcome

    Welcome Oh, this just kinda creeped its way into my mind.. Kinda weird, tell me what you think. I treat people with hospitality, Cleary saying "Welcome to Our Home." I ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Roma and Julius

    Hah, this was so cool! It was like "Romeo and Juliet" Pixar version! xD I actually had to scoot closer to the screen I got so into it. My eyes ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Please Don't Run

    "Please don’t run. You won’t be late. The Lord will meet you, At the gate." Love the ending. The only issues I have are with "Definitely don’t race;" I feel ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Beyond the Stache

    Bahaha, thanks a lot, I just woke up my crabby little sister laughing! Anyway, this was super creative and silly (the combo I love the most) but it was a ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Banned for picking her nose.

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: The User Below You...

    Yepp! TPBM needs to brush their teeth. xD

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]

    Hmm.. 6.5 It reminds me of myself and Sierra Mist.. =P

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: love and fufillment

    Ok.. I see where you were trying to go with this.. but I'm not sure you got there. First of all, you definitely need to break this up. It'll make ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: What is your favorite Michael Jackson song of all time?

    I like "Ben" from when it was still the Jackson 5. Nothing touches the heart like a love song about a killer rat. =]

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Banned for needing to belong.

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Monster

    I really liked this.. I'm not sure exactly what happened, but maybe that's the point..? Anyway, I don't have much to say that hasn't already been said.. punctuation etc. But ...

    Jan 1, 2009


The blood jet is poetry and there is no stopping it.
— Sylvia Plath