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ok... i dont want sympathy but alright.

lol, yeah I know.

oral therapy? what does that mean? sounds a little sus.

thats how you spell it! I thought it was enrapt but the spell check put in the hyphen thing.

i only read the title. Hahaha. Good work :wink:

really? I always thought Darwin was hotter.

:x dont quote me!!

I thought it was pretty good.

keep in mind guys that i posted this straight after writing it, so of course its going to be crappy ;)

wow. What can I say? As far as I can tell, its pretty good. But i got a litle confused at the end. Who is "she"?

If i made fall into fell, it wouldnt rhyme. Kangaroo Tail is a plant, and it takes years to grow. i cant say the heart of the might ... etc ...

I liked that poem, but it just seems a little empty. Thats all. But I have to write 2 replies so I will :)