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keep in mind guys that i posted this straight after writing it, so of course its going to be crappy ;)

Dear Lucy, Let me start by saying you have to be the biggest retard on the planet! You stupid skitso monkey! But you're not all bad, because you are funny ...

wow. What can I say? As far as I can tell, its pretty good. But i got a litle confused at the end. Who is "she"?

If i made fall into fell, it wouldnt rhyme. Kangaroo Tail is a plant, and it takes years to grow. i cant say the heart of the might ... etc ...

A K of bushland Blackened by fire New growth bloom where the old growth fall The Kangaroo tails A wonder of the bush Take years to grow a metre tall ...

and now to write a second post ;) I agree with bubblewrapped (in the nicest way possible), but when I first read the poem, i got the sense it was ...

I liked that poem, but it just seems a little empty. Thats all. But I have to write 2 replies so I will :)

:) thanks for the warm welcome Jack. I appreciate it since I'm new here and to be honest, I have no idea how this whole dealy works. I dont even ...