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oh ok lol

something I've been playing with over the last... 3 years if my maths is correct. Tell me what you think ;) One As he inhaled the bitter-sweet air only smelt ...

Don't ask me why I wrote this. I just want a platypus. :( He glides through the water with all the elegance of a swan in flight. The water ripples ...

awwww, i love fishies!!!

apart from it being insest, which is disgusting, it was really well written, excellent descriptions and it flowed too, in my opinion. :)

oooo, impressive. never wouldve thought of any of that. but isnt the Ravenclaw symbol a raven? and also, just near the end it says before when it should say be ...

if you're writing in youre journal, you dont usually say: welcome to (where ever you live). thats all i have to say, cos its weird.

ohh come on! surely i can get more critiques that that!!!!

i always thought eighty year old women were nice because they were trying to go to heaven... well, guess im wrong AS USUAL

Prologue Skye Jeffory had to sit in the Melbrooke Mental Hospital waiting room for what could easily seem like an hour but, based on the constant glances up at the ...

awww that is soo sad :( but well written. when I read it, it reminded me of The Pact, which I think is the only book to make me cry. ...

thanks :) im only writing this post to see my signature :) CLAPS FOR LUCY!

thanks :) im only writing this post to see my signature :) CLAPS FOR LUCY!

sorry if theyre reading this, but your peom is better that Harpz. Cute how you put the "the" in the title.

ok... i dont want sympathy but alright.