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granted, but you hurt your jeans and make them cry! i wish i had something to do

granted, but it is so sweet it attracts all sorts of bugs that eat it straight from your hand I wish my computer wasnt so slow

granted but then they run off of the page and cause havock by trashing your house. I wish I don't have to go back to school

im lucy, who are you?

lol, yes i agree with all the critiques i could be bothered reading (which was the first one). Its really funny. hehehehe

this is half fiction, half true so i don't know where to post it. I only wrote this because i was trying to unblock my writers block and it sort ...

I had a weird dream last night... i was in a town called Stawell and i was with a group of friends that ive never seen before. I was shopping ...

yay! more! i love them!! you are so good at these poems! i espescially love the one about the shirt because the other day my brother walked into my room ...

haha. i like it but its too short. WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh and piepieman (lol, love the name) lighten up a little. god! poetry can actually be fun. its not all ...

wow snoink, thats the shortest critique ive ever read from you. i like the poem, its very... interesting i guess. but the no body knows who i am bit, well ...

its not just in this though. everything i write people critisise the spelling even when i spell check and its cos of the u's. i know this has spelling mistakes ...

lego!! wooh i love lego!! but why were you shooting them? never shoot lego! never never never, or i shoot you! mwahaha. as for the poem, it lacks interest. Im ...

um, can i just say that it appears that people are really picky on my spelling and they think words like "colour" and "favourite" are spelt wrong. they arent. in ...

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