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i have to agree with incan. As nicely as possible... this was definately NOT the best poem here. Sorry. But I was reading it and i rolled my eyes. I ...

awww scribbles *hugs* Thats really romantic... i like it... but i did get a little confuzzled at the "You weave still, fair Arachne Grander than Orpheus or the artful Daughters ...

hehehehe Cedric Quilfeather. Where have I heard that one before?? I liked the first part of the story, the part I read. I thought for my own benefit a bit ...

thats really cute.

wow... thats really good.. but whats the Game? thats the one thing I didn't get. But I liked the way it was written, the description and the like. It was ...

Oh my goodness!!! you never cease to amaze me incan!

I never thought I'd say this (me being nice and loving) that I agree with Incan. HOW DID THAT HAPPEN :shock: ??? Anyway, this sort of poem is the things ...

oh my mum did that once, and it scared her so much cos they did it and then there was this shadow on the wall and they all screamed and ...

I just got this weird feeling that I wanted to write something with ghosts in it, lol, so this is chapter one of the thing i wrote. please! all critiques ...

oh my god! i believe in ghosts!! but thats pretty much all i believe in. Ive heard so many of those evp recordings that it challenges the disbelief. Oh my ...

actually, i took this poem seriously.... haha, im just kidding. I wrote it cos I want a pet platypus. Um, i think my brother has licked a cockroach... so if ...

awwwwww that is so cute!! it reminds me of that story you told me about flora. lol i loved it.

i changed my background to a darker option cos the snowflakes made me shiver. i agree with the floral option, give it a go

that does make a lot of sense actually. Ill try these things out. Thanks for that ;)

thats one awesome first sentence, rieda. Nothing personal, I just have to force myself to read fantasy, and im to lazy to do that today, lol.