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i liked it. And i was honoured to get asked to critique. lol. from what i read, there was nothing wrong with it. Well done. Sorry if you wanted a ...

this was really short, so i couldnt pick much wrong things with it... EXCEPT!! you wrote like this: i have a cat.his... no spaces after the full stop. it makes ...

right.... yeah.... take riedas advice, and then some ;)

oh my goodness.... i cant even find the right words.... just oh my goodness.......

lmao!!!

oh my god no!!! :(

lol yes, i agree. i didnt have a lot of time to actually think of a plot, let alone write one. Im not sure if there was supposed to be ...

lol sorry, i clicked submit instead of preview

This was a task my Creative Writing class had to do. The topic was "First Day", and mine was the most impressive, apparently. I think the rest just wrote about ...

im not even going to bother reading that after the way you carried on before.[-------------------------------------------------------------------------------] Deleted partially for irrelevant content

dont call people bitches!! its mean!! unless you have a good reason to. Incan, did the muse do anything to you that gave her the title of the name "bitch"??? ...

SQUISH THE SPIDER!!!

scribbles, are you on a poetry streak? Youve written heaps in the last couple of days! goodness!

Writers block is frustrating. Its beyond frustrating, it’s more like self inflicted internal torture. I know what writers block is like, i dont need to read about it. This piece ...

lol incan, i love that... If you indended for this work to confuse and ultimately bore the reader, you succeeded. If your intentions were other than that, you failed. Best, ...