Loose

The much anticipated long chapter, but I think it's a bit iffy. CORRIES DIARY Corrie's Diary I had to get away. They won't understand. It's just something I had to ...

An even shorter chapter XD CHAPTER 6 THE NOTE I'm sorry for running away, but it's something I had to do. I can't be in Melbourne, I can't go to ...

lol, Nutty and Mat! Hows that for deja'vu?! **puppy dog eyes** can someone pair me up??

XD sorry guys, I dont intentionally make cliff-hangers, they just happen.

theres no hook, and whats that white box at the bottom? There, I critted, but I cant read Sci-fi or fantasy. You shouldve told me the genre beforehand!!

was that thing a werewolf? Freaky! The disturbing brilliance continues!!

disturbing. . . and fantastic at the same time. Brad, thats you in a nutshell ;) I LOVE THIS. Now to read chapter 2!

XD i love that rihanna song! This poem sounds more like a little riddle tune thing you teach year 2s after a spelling test. Only a bit more grown up. ...

=O whos knocking? I dont get it. . .

House and Garden is a magazine

oh my god I love your name! Sish-bee! so cute!! But, um, the chat speak is frowned upon here. Thanks is spelt without an x. Just giving you a heads ...

I enjoyed this, and Im not even a poetry person. It had a very story-like feel to it. It was short sweet and simple. well done

i liked this, very well described. :D

happened not happoned

Marge, check chapter 2 Yeah I have a problem with tenses XD