Loose

Just to spice it up a little. . .

For those of you who are up to date with my story Kiss My Tears Goodnight (once known as Double Dad), you'd know that Corrie is hitching to Adelaide. I ...

yes, you did miss something. But dont worry, youll find out more as the plot unfolds. **evil cackle**

well I dont know about that. John Marsden manages quite well. And Bryce Courtany.

Myth pointed out the errors. I enjoyed this, though. A very well handled story on famine, and its nice to see my country got a mention in there. Well done!

=O you're such a good drawer Jenn!!! I wish I could draw like that **is jealous**

I liked the blue! If she had purple glowing eyes, shouldn't this story be in Fantasy fiction??

Thanks, but I am 14. And I never really noticed the "this morning" bit. As I said, I just wrote it on the spot then handed it up.

This had only one crit so I thought I might add :) Only Im not sure what to add. Just that I dont think "minutes away from hers" would work. ...

a cliff hanger mat? the tables have turned. This was good, although I cant critique cos you have too many

it might just be me, but I think there's too much dialogue in this.

two things, ok? 1- this should be in the writing tips section, not non fiction 2- SPELLING!!!!!!! SPELL CHECK!!!!

Can I just say I love you? You're writing style is fantastic!! Only problem is, you said they don't have names, but you named them Boy and Girl. That may ...

I proof read this because Fand hit the big problem on the head. Where are the paragraphs? ALSO you have a problem with you're spelling! You are aware that there ...

actually, thats what I had in mind. People write in their diaries different ways. This chapter was written about a week ago and I hadnt seen it since, until I ...