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5/10 I'm not very fond of it. And Baroness, you get 8 from me :D

I think I subconsciously wrote this chapter. Spooky. Well, the street part was me writing, then I just zoned out with the pen in my hand and when I came ...

anyhoo?? I think Ive found my new favourite YWS member :D AND your username bares a similar resemblance to a sugar brand. WELCOME :)

It did

I'm not too fond of this chapter, but other people think its ok. So I need some other opinions. Thanks ;) CHAPTER 10 ANDREWS HITCH HIKER She was silent for ...

before I start let me just say Im the worst poetry critter that ever roamed this earth. This was cute. There, my crit. LOL

Kiss my tears goodnight (nee double dad) has FINALLY been posted 2 chapters at a time. Yay! Cos every-one's been whinging about it, lol. The originals of these chapters were ...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY JENNA!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D Lots of love!!!! **gives jen a present**

Yay for short chapters!! I'm following that style myself. However I didn't like this. The first sentence drags on. Too long. And there really isnt much else to comment on, ...

awww such a sweet story, with such a horrific ending. I really enjoyed this, it was ver well written. The only thing I pointed out was "“**ore!” He spat," were ...

yeah and a bit creepy!!

well I hope your writing talent improves or you'll be ripped to shreds here!! But dont worry, the people still love you. :D

I like them, theyre very good. The sort of stuff I saw at the year 12 art show I went to with my art class. :D

This is one bizzarre topic, snoinkus

HELLO RUTH!! I have a cousin called Ruth. Welcome to YWS. And dont worry about being French. People won't notice unless you point it out. Make yourself right at home!