Loose

9/10 That is so cute!!

oh, that's so sweet. I am definately looking for that book.

I'll definately have a look for it next time I'm at the library, it sounds great. What do the notes say, though?

Your mistakes: Underline is a missed capital Bold is a spelling mistake There he stood, tall, slim, but in his own way, handsome. It's his eyes. I thought, for they ...

On the forest floor scurried a murmuring, shimmering stream filled with clear, cold water. There is nothing wrong with the adjectives here The twenty five men and women that now ...

8/10 I love cats, they're so cute!!

I'll join the minority and say Mercury :)

hehe, those teddy bears are really cute! They look like a ball of cotton or fluff trying to be evil and freak people out, so cute!

These are really good photos, as you've been told. But I think the one with the words on an angle was the best :)

I'm not too fond of the beginning, to be honest. It talks about death and drags a little. The brackets are a bit of a pest, too. Also, what are ...

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that smiley is so cute! But whats the ball over his head for?

Don't

This is short so it's hard to critique, which probably explains why I'm the second. This shouldn't be in Romantic Fiction, it should be in a Poetry forum. Also there's ...

CHAPTER 14 CORRIES DIARY I didn't stop to watch Andrew's Ute roll away into the night. Instead I turned my back and raced down the driveway to apartment number 4. ...