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Red Hot Chilli Peppers

Ok, here we go. I was looking at the clear blue sky as he was telling me that his love for me, wasnt the same love i had for him. ...

FINALLY! A not-fantasy storybook! I must join! Name-Peter B Age-16 Occupation- Student and a part time burger flipper at McDonalds Gender- Male Appearance- Short mouse-grey hair, green eyes, freckles

Happy 19th Crysi!

you talk too much about nothing? Selene, you'll fit right in! Welcome to YWS!

I know I promised myself to start a romantic/dramatic fiction story (other than DD) NEXT year, but I was just browsing through YWS forums when inspiration hit me like a ...

**collapses** Writing Checklist: -Punctuation -Spelling -Appropriate Capitals **searches for them in the piece** **fails miserably** Your "i"s should be "I" There should be periods. Correct spelling a

You'll learn to love it

I'm from Australia. Adelaide, to be exact. So are Mattster -NSW Penguinattack - NSW Elelel-SA And plenty more!

Wow, this was a very good chapter. Definately change the rating to R before you get into trouble ;) The only thing that bugged me, and I mean reeeaally bugged ...

Well, it seems I got here a bit late and it's already been critiqued to breaking point. The only thing I should say really, that I can say without repeating, ...

Wewt! The Australian Population expands! Welcome to YWS, twistedclocks (you need a nickname). I'm Lucy, also 15, from the great land of Aus. Just PM me if you need help, ...

I voted! And I'm in the majority... How popular you must feel!

Removed.

Hmm, interesting. Definately change the rating! This shouldn't be pg with the mention of rape, sex, dicks. I loved the part about the eyes, though. "Honey coloured" was a pretty ...