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This made me sad, when I heard about it, but I'm glad that her son is taking over. Espescially when he said "The best revenge is democracy." It made me ...

it's an interesting theory. And a great alternative to Pain killers. **can't swallow pills** I might try it out sometime :)

Here we call "stickshifts" "gearsticks" And for the amputation, my drama teacher was talking to me and Samuel about it. He said that when the nerves in the limb die, ...

Ok... The whole "Sean", "Maid" and "Bride" conversation layout is enough to do someone's head in. Try setting it out normally, so readers don't get irritated.

This was a little short, and a liitle too-much-information, but still good. Thing that bugged me: The Main character (don't hate me but I forgot his name), says "...because you ...

Oh, goodness... [shy] Me and my Beanie! Of which I love! Me right now, and don't I look sleepy! [/shy]

This is a draft, and I expect there to be a million and one problems with it, so feel free... Chapter 12 Kitty's (to be filled in at a later ...

I'll make this brief, since I don't know who to put... Pingi- Pingi, you deserve to be on every members list. You are ausome and everyone loves you! 'Specially me! ...

I have read "The Pact", and it is the most heartbreaking book I have ever read. It's about love and loss, and it is the only book to have made ...

Pasty

6/10 it's cute, but you've had it rated waaaay too many times

Great great great great great! And I don't mean your story is great. I mean you use the word "great" enough times to make someones head explode. Look in a ...

I always thought that rice was the main ingredient in coke (clearly I looked around the room for inspiration there)

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Alice