Loose

Dis iz da awesomezorz! HAHA! Just joshing! ... sort of. This was a good poem, but unfortunately I couldn't read it. If I can't stand it, or if it has ...

Wow Linds, I really like this, and I'm not even a poetry person! Although the "Tell me" was a bit repetitive, the names following ("my love", "My sweetheart" etc) seemed ...

Wewt! Part 14! **addicted** I hate to say it, because it makes me seem like a pathetic critiquer, but this was great. I can't find much wrong with it... I ...

Well, it's your choice. Bye.

This was a good piece, but as Perf. said, it was a bit of an anticlimax. It needs a big finale, because the whole discussion of love and marriage feels ...

**huggles Razie** I'm so glad I'm not the only one who verbally talks to my characters!

Tip: un-nessecary poll= big no-no

It's a good piece, but there are a few minor details in there. Perhaps re-read to check your sentences are complete and typo-less. I don’t know what I would if ...

It might just be personal taste, but your starting line doesn't sound right. "Your mother... she's... died" It makes sense, but it's one of those sentences that you have to ...

Pingi and Mattimus! And I'll continue to think that always!

cereal

Floor tiles

I understand the door-to-door chocolate sales. Schools always warn us not to do it in case of creepy perverts who, unfortunately, exist.

that it wasn't dog poo, it was...

I didn't hear about this until tonight when... Channel ten(?) news did a year review. And I was appauled. What made my jaw drop was when they said the judge ...