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Dance Dance.

Football.

Wrestling.

Your hook is disgusting. You know what a hook is, don't you? It's the first sentence (sometimes paragraph), that lures the reader to read more. I may not be the ...

I actually didn't like this part. It seemed too convieniant. Like if the guy I like was to suddenly turn around and say that everything he ever did to anyone ...

Interesting, definately intersting. Although the main point of this piece is to tell how you almost died, I had a bit of a hard time with the other paragraphs. The ...

Aww, no, Angel. You don't look stoned, just sleepy. Now, my turn. See what happens when the chat dies... ... I take photos.

Hello fellow Australian.

Oh no! :cry: I just read this! Weird how I had a desire to log on to MSN, which was where I was first told. It isn't fair! Poor Heath!

Wewt! Lucy number three! I'm Lucy, and Elelel is Lucy! Welcome!

Eeee! I love Degrassi! Mike Lobel is the awesomeness ^_^

Hello.

Peter B walked back to the computer desk as he read the classifieds in the local newspaper through his thick reading glasses. When he sat at the chair, he found ...

"No, no, die you stupid boar! Hell yeah! That's right! What? When did you get a friend? Well, it's ok, I can kill him with my baton!" It was five ...

Saxon-- I was cold. That was the first thing I noticed. And I thought I was dying. I remembered in all the old movies how dying characters would say "I ...