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You know I mean only the best when I say that your first paragraph annoys me. It might be because in English we have been studying pieces that have more ...

No more. It's not helping my ego.

English Homework. John. A draft wafted through the hall, offering the illusion that the house was empty. John knew better. Small, salty drops rolled carelessly down his red cheeks. His ...

"This book is boring."

I hope you realise that "peace" backwards means something much worse...

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No, realisation is spelt correctly.

Personally, I think this might be more appropriate in the "Historical Fiction" forum, unless this is her real diary, which I doubt, since Molly Brown wasn't a passenger on board ...

Thanks. The task was to take something boring and make it interesting. Hope I achieved that.

English homework. The Process. Fluid surrounded my pale body, filling my lungs as I struggled for breath. Around me, the rest of my class groaned and begged in gargles and ...

Sorry guys, but I am officially pulling myself out of this story book. Too much going on in my life to concentrate on a storybook. Say bye bye to the ...

Sorry guys, I have to retire from this story. I haven't been active at all. I just don't have the energy or the interest in continuing, with all the stuff ...

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Sherry

Jeeze, could your opening sentence drag on any longer? Fix it if you want your readers awake for the rest of the story. Also, paragraphs are a good idea, too.