Loose

This was sensational. It's not the sort of thing you read very often on this website; a teacher being stabbed. I particularly like how you begin with a simple concept; ...

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5/10 A little creepy...

They were stormy filled with all the stories she had read. Dreary from all the sentences she had consumed. What were? Her eyes? This would be better attached to the ...

This piece is too dialogue dependant! You don't bother describing the surroundings, emotions, anything, except for what everyone is saying. This leads to a very messy story and what appears ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Retreat day. (I have one coming up ----____-----)

Pasta. XD

I have discovered that there are a few pieces on here with ugly first sentences. And I'm getting a bit tired of repeating myself. So here are a few tips ...

Bella laid on her gorgeous bed, of colors violet, bright green and blue. Mmm, that's nice. **yawn** Ever heard of the "uh oh factor"? It's a special little feature that ...

Although my chain of goodbyes will not be as long as Hunters, I thought it was common courtesy to announce that I am leaving YWS. I'm not sure if I'll ...

Dare I? Me and Mar. **runs away**

Blonde.

Was this really worth your time posting? This would have been more suitable in a blog. It's hardly displayed as a narrative and is rather pointless. I found no point ...

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