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Re: Secret Love
Hero to review... I'm reviewing for you! Okay here we go: That was a great poem, but (If this isn't what you wanted then you should have made it so ...
Feb 9, 2010 -
Re: Maximum Ride: 9/11
Haha, true. She actually said that unfortunately, the Erasers didn't turn out as good as they did. And they were, the only successes.
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: The Best Book Ever Read
Percy Jackson and the Olympians Maximum Ride Quantum Prophecy Trilogy The Hitch Hiker's Guide to the Galaxy The Guardians Mrs Frisby and the Rats of Nim Animorphs (The First books ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Lauren's One Stop Critique Shop
Okay. . The Janitors - Prologue. COuld you please review. ----- TheNewHero coincidentally would review your work as well. Contact TheNewHero, help him learn the art of reviewing. Let him ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: HELP: Writing the Superhero.
Thanks tons. I agree with every single thing said. By the way, you forgot the telepath :) I forgot to include anywhere he could see so he doesn't go squat. ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: The journey - Chapter one
Oops. Sorry. Stupid Mistake. Never mind. Ignore.
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: The journey - Chapter one
Hi! TheNewHero, your reviewer for today, supports writing! Hi, NewHero here to review: Firstly let me say that this was a very interesting story. But (I don't know your story ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: The Janitors (Prologue - Final Edit)
Here is my final edit of the Janitors Prologue. I think I did pretty well. One, two, three and here we go... Prologue: Designed to destroy the country, asked to ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: A Girl Can Dream
Great. Really cute.
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Maximum Ride: 9/11
I don't know if you can review fanfics but... I'll try! NewHero here, I'm a Max fan. Okay first thing, the whole idea was great. Second thing, Max narration was ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Papillion (1)
TheNewHero is here! Review time: I suggest you read what the above reviewers have to say because I didn't notice much of those things. Alright, first I agree with Narnia ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Chess/Love Game
She's beautiful, I remark I'm the black pieces, bold and brave and dashing, She's the charming glass, glistening, beautiful, smart. Our pawns meet at the halfway line: And it's like, ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Being American
I am TheNewHero, your reviewer. Let's get on shall we? First thing: You start out saying you hate being the one and then ask people to stop hating on you. ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: HELP: Writing the Superhero.
I'm currently sweating over my latest story about superheroes. I'm trying to make the powers realistic, the main characters harmonious (Protagonists mostly) and of course, the plot interesting, fun an
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: life
Just realized something. Scrap the picture. That kid's not an animal. :)
Feb 5, 2010
