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  • Other Poetry Re: Secret Love

    Hero to review... I'm reviewing for you! Okay here we go: That was a great poem, but (If this isn't what you wanted then you should have made it so ...

    Feb 9, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Maximum Ride: 9/11

    Haha, true. She actually said that unfortunately, the Erasers didn't turn out as good as they did. And they were, the only successes.

    Feb 8, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: The Best Book Ever Read

    Percy Jackson and the Olympians Maximum Ride Quantum Prophecy Trilogy The Hitch Hiker's Guide to the Galaxy The Guardians Mrs Frisby and the Rats of Nim Animorphs (The First books ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Lauren's One Stop Critique Shop

    Okay. . The Janitors - Prologue. COuld you please review. ----- TheNewHero coincidentally would review your work as well. Contact TheNewHero, help him learn the art of reviewing. Let him ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: HELP: Writing the Superhero.

    Thanks tons. I agree with every single thing said. By the way, you forgot the telepath :) I forgot to include anywhere he could see so he doesn't go squat. ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The journey - Chapter one

    Oops. Sorry. Stupid Mistake. Never mind. Ignore.

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The journey - Chapter one

    Hi! TheNewHero, your reviewer for today, supports writing! Hi, NewHero here to review: Firstly let me say that this was a very interesting story. But (I don't know your story ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Janitors (Prologue - Final Edit)

    Here is my final edit of the Janitors Prologue. I think I did pretty well. One, two, three and here we go... Prologue: Designed to destroy the country, asked to ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: A Girl Can Dream

    Great. Really cute.

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Maximum Ride: 9/11

    I don't know if you can review fanfics but... I'll try! NewHero here, I'm a Max fan. Okay first thing, the whole idea was great. Second thing, Max narration was ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Papillion (1)

    TheNewHero is here! Review time: I suggest you read what the above reviewers have to say because I didn't notice much of those things. Alright, first I agree with Narnia ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Chess/Love Game

    She's beautiful, I remark I'm the black pieces, bold and brave and dashing, She's the charming glass, glistening, beautiful, smart. Our pawns meet at the halfway line: And it's like, ...

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Being American

    I am TheNewHero, your reviewer. Let's get on shall we? First thing: You start out saying you hate being the one and then ask people to stop hating on you. ...

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: HELP: Writing the Superhero.

    I'm currently sweating over my latest story about superheroes. I'm trying to make the powers realistic, the main characters harmonious (Protagonists mostly) and of course, the plot interesting, fun an

    Feb 5, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: life

    Just realized something. Scrap the picture. That kid's not an animal. :)

    Feb 5, 2010


Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions from insufficient premises.
— Samuel Butler