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Hero here! Now, to review. Note if you cannot handle blood, you shouldn't read this. "read alittle and review what you read, you don't have to do it all at ...

Hey , the NewHero here to review. Let's start at the end shall we? The dragons arrival seems to be tensionous right? I didn't feel that. Maybe make it a ...

I'm TheNEWHero. Hehe. Well you could make it so long as their in physical contact. Also I really don't see reading minds as working. Seriously, we have enough memory space ...

Are this and Papillion 1 tied? Because I much prefer this. Please PM me with your latest Papillions. You've got me hooked.

Thanks tons guys! Yay, the title works! Actually I'm going with the idea of just Jack's beginning but every character mentioned plays a huge role. I'm going to edit this ...

(I'm a Christian by the way) Well, personally I think that He was very darn amazing. But He wasn't superman. In the Bible he was described as "As much man ...

To add on to that: Percy once described Quintus, the swordsfighter, as a chess player: He created a string of moves with no visible pattern. Then he delivered the final ...

Okay, so this is a Percy Jackson and the Olympians fanfic. I used this translator so it may not be exactly like the words are in the book. However, it's ...

Thanks guys! I'll rewrite and repost. Well, edit actually.

Could you please review this? TheNewHero

Could you please review? Thanks. TheNewHero

WOuld you please review my latest story? The Janitors - Prologue Thanks, Hero out.

TheNewHero, TheLastOlympian, TheLightningThief, here to review. Now I'm not a poet, but... First thing I thought of was Katherine Patterson's ending to Jap. Running in the twilight and all. Very ...

Could you please review my Action/Adventure story? The Janitors - Prologue:

It's called the Janitors -- Prologue. Could you please review? I thought the name would be a hook, it was before...