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I see you're new so... Welcome, to the good life! Now, I'm going to review this poem today. Sit back and enjoy. Firstly, I think you should have done this ...

This was nice. Very nice. There were a few repetitive parts mainly involving the word "insect". Otherwise, very nice.

Are you gonna post this?

I don't know. When I heard the name it rocked. Every part of this, even your word choice and every B and P in your story worked. So... much... power! ...

Well done! If only I could write this kind of Romantic Fiction. What I liked most about your story is it was Short and Sweet. So, on to the review: ...

Well done! This was really good. Just one question: :arrow: Who is this story going to focus on? Because if it's Anna, then what you did was fine. If it's ...

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Amy! You're really popular. Sorry to add to the baggage but: Could you review that? Thanks.

I tihnk this was really awesome, only nit-pick? This game is of waiting,and for you this I will do. There should be a comma. You could've said I'll. Well done, ...

Adding on, I'd describe the battered up Toyota, whether in dialogue or what.

Hero here to review! Look, I really couldn't find anything up with your story. I like your dialogue narration, I'd continue with that. Looking forward to the next part. *Hero ...

Okay, maybe I made a mistake there but still. Who is Okami?

Could you review my story please. The Janitors Chap 1: Thanks! TheHero

Nice. I may no have completely got everything but I'm not a poet. So stuff me. I'd just tidy up and maybe break up the paragraph.

Master_Yoda, tattle on him, I shall. Outstanding in the ways, of the YWS. By Nate, he's a great guy.