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Hey! hero here for a review... So what I liked about this poem? The scenery. Not what you were aiming for? Doesn't matter. Tips? I'd use something better than skittering. ...

But Percy's not the centre of this work. Does that exclude this from Fanfic?

This was really, really good. Beautiful and I wanted to cry. Well done.

Very straightforward and I see what you're getting at. Nice. Personally I'd rather say, "Why does it matter so badly?" but anyway! Well done. *LIKED*

Hero, here to review! Okay, I ilked this but it was a bit shaky. Simple enough to improve... Today we'll go Problems/Tips/Praise :) --- Problems: We shall focus on... :arrow: ...

Her pretty dress was green. It read: I'm an Angel! And had a sparkling fairy. Her face was stoic and solemn yet cute, despite the grime and dirt, despite the ...

Where would you guys like this thing to go?

Hi, here for a quick-review. I agree with Karsten, maybe you could fix that. I won't nit-pick today because a proper read-through would fix it all. I understand how poetic ...

I Liked this. Like "LIKE". Anyway, if you're looking for a nice little saying, you can't have a rainbow without rain. You've gotta cry before you sing. Bye! Well done.

Hey WD. THE Janitors (Chap 1/Part 1) Action Adventure (Though some say it should be in either Sci-Fi or Urban Fantasy) I'd like you to look out for clicheness and ...

Need some Class for my review. Would you mind, Act/Adv? Superhero teenagers... Someone says it should be Urban Fantasy or Sci-Fi but I'm not so sure.

Hero here! I slightly disagree ClaraKingofSnow. But I love your poem and don't want it changed. So instead, let's get the title. *LIKED*

Hero, here to review! Let's see, I'll go Problems/Praise/Tips. ------ Problems: Your grammar shook. It shook the dishes in the kitchen, but nothing broke. In other words, there was no ...

Hero here to review... Okay, I haven't read your story before this Chapter, but that will help me give a more straight forward review. And thanks for all the Janitors ...

Deep. I Liked this. Though I do have a few complaints, praises and a tip... ---- Complaints: It Amaze Me How you actually looked straight into my eyes and lied ...