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Hero cliche to avoid? Romance? It's not bad at all, but it's often very interesting for the hero to fall in love with a member of his team (Talking superhero.demigod ...

Hey, here to review! --- You shot God, really? This was kind of offensive, I'm sorry to say. But that won't slip into my review: --- Praise: Once again your ...

Hey man! I'm here to do review. Get ready, get set, grow! :lol: Okay, so Praise/Problems/Tips --- Praise: I cannot actually say much, because I'm not sure exactly what you ...

Heya! I liked this piece but I think it could be longer. One tip? There goes the Red Queen, The White Queen, If you want you could change it to, ...

Hi! Hero here to review this :D --- Okay, I must admit... your title hooked me. I was hoping for a very beautiful comparison piece where I realize the truth, ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS! I'm TheNewHero and am here to review your work! Isn't that great? :D --- Praise: I liked this story mostly because of the story itself. ...

Really good, maybe one day I'll use this with your permission? :D *Liked*

Poet's Note: There was a shower over my head as the shampoo was being washed away. Naturally I couldn't open my eyes without screaming my lungs out, so I was ...

Heya! Hero here to review... Okay, there's not much for me to review and (a) I haven't read The Legion of Superheroes comics so... it'll pretty much be a content ...

*Liked* Hey Hero here to review! There's not much to work with since it's good but I'll try. Problems/Praise/Tips --- Problems: Firstly, there were a few lines to be improved: ...

Nice! Sounds like something Owl City could sing. Well done.

Well... here I am. Okay, so Problems/Praise/Tips order, eh? Problems: Like Scarlett said, spelling, although that may have been intentional right? There was only one other nit-pickable instance... Hav

Wow. Your title really hooked me and this was very well written. I think you might want to include the whole "Risk Takers" bit into the story. Otherwise I really ...

Really awesome! Very nice wording. *LIKED*

Hey hey! Very nice... Your poem was beautiful. A bit shaky in rythym sometimes but maybe you intended that. Welcome to YWS! *Liked* In Ink and Electronic Code, TheNewHero