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  • Lounge, The Re: Young Writers Society Testimonials.

    Oh what a fateful day, a lonely Hero prowled the Interwebz. Then did the hero Google: WRITING SITES YWS! YWS! Oh Y-W-S! It's helped me tons, and its really fun, ...

    Mar 26, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: FANG: A Maximum Ride Novel

    Angel says, Fang will be the first to die. Angel's never wrong... --- Nobody is immortal --- Hey guys! So, I recently finished FANG: A Maximum Ride Novel and it ...

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: It's My Turn Now.

    Well done. I liked this. It seemed kind of personal... enough. BUt a suggestion would to be to make it more... detailed? Accurate? Whatever the case - awesomeness. Fly On, ...

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Untitled

    Heya! I'd just like to say this was a very nice poem, but not necessarily above average. It's not very personal, any person could take this and use it as ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You make me wanna feel

    Awesome. I don't have much to critique as I'm not used to critiquing poems :( Dark cinderella + Evil Knight? Nice.

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Coming Soon: YWS News

    Hey Nate, most guys' question: Will there be a sport section or won't that work because of international audience and stuff? Can there be advertisements and stuff?

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm New. Lets have a party

    "I Gotta Feeling! Oh snap! The lights went out!"

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Designer Children, Why or Why Not?

    It wouldn't work. Humans would lose individuality and eventually, we'd all be a bunch of mindless clones. "I want my child to like this and that so we can be ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Unborn

    Hey I really like this poem. It defined the world I'd like to live in. "Grass stained jeans" Nice man :D *LIKED* This should be featured.

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Beneath a Dying Tree

    I really liked this piece but it felt a bit... empty. Just a suggestion: try swapping it around, boy crying instead? *Liked*

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Your Spiderman

    There are three versions to this. The one that's up is what I'd like to be review. My other two are earlier variations (One which EB and Crescent agreed wasn't ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: When writing, what is your most difficult challenge?

    The Plot. I'm two chapters into the story and then, "Wait a second... I have a better idea!" I can't even start Chapter 1 without another pop up.

    Mar 19, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Scour of Power (Prologue) ( newest chapter 5)

    Hey again. Darkness, just a little tip, it's better if you write your different chapters as different topics. Because No-one is going to see Chapter 3 and 4 and 5 ...

    Mar 17, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Love Is a Cruel Mistress

    I'm not so sure about this. I was hoping for a funny poem but that's just cause of a friend I have. There should be no apostrophe on the violets.

    Mar 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Have A Question

    Congrats on the feature, dude.

    Mar 16, 2010


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