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Re: Where does my story go?
It should go under Mystery. There's mystery forum? --- Where would superheroes go? It's set in the present time and I guess there is an underlying science fiction. But it ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Presenting your Presentation: Titling your Title!
ALL CREDIT FOR THIS ARTICLE GOES TO THE GUYS AT SUPERHERO NATION. I ENCOURAGE YOU ALL TO CHECK OUT THE WEBSITE --- Intro: It's Happened to me time and time ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Spirit Sword - Chapter 5
Hello, Hero here for a review. Okay, firstly: I'd italicize the Book's writing. At first (I haven't read the other chapters) I thought you were writing on Gia and trust ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Four
'Ello once again! TheNewHero here for a review. *Fergie voice* Let's get it started... --- Woah! Shakey beginning! Two mistakes too many as well. I dressed into dry clothes and ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Three
Okay, your story is moving along pretty quickly and take pride in the fact you're not stalling. Well done on this chapter, except for a shaky beginning (More on that ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter 1
Ditto what the previous reviewers said. They missed one thing though: It is true too, today is the day that my evil father is moving my brother, Shane, and I ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: One Day
'ey there! NewHero here. This sounds like a vent and I'm not sure if that works with lyrics because mostly that has melody and rythym. Now I'm no expert but ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Understanding
Ditto to what perdido said without the crappy bit :P What you've mainly done is just asked a question. What will I carry after this? What will I carry on ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: To Be A Rose
Hey this poem got awesome near the end but the very first line is overused, my friend: "Beauty is a Rose". Rather invert this or change it totally. Okay, with ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: USA On Non-American Maps
Nope, not that I've seen down here in the Southern Hemisphere... in the Eastern Hemisphere... In Africa.
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: The Hero
I was born of air. I'm not normal. And I won't pretend to be. I'm a Hero. And one day, when I'm well-known on YWS... I'll change my name to ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Friends or Followers?
Thumbs-up for the newsfeed, but... well... there are people like me who have coffee for blood. Meaning I change my status every few hours. Won't that irritate the heck out ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: No More "Age Limit"
Good on you Nate. Just never... *ever* change the title. It works man. Plus I tihnk the whole, "YOUNG" thing keeps Internet prowlers away so.. yeah.
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Adding Dimensions (3) -- A Fantabulous Climax
Julius' Uncle! I never commented here? I'm sure I did... Yoda! Thanks for this, I've used it tons. I have a novel planning software and with some scene's chapters I've ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Submission Call For YWS News!
Will there be a "Smile-a-While" segment?
Apr 1, 2010