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Thank you Elinor, and by Pebbles (This is what I needed help with) I meant small memories. Those quiet summer afternoons, the beach, sharing a pizza... all those little things ...

Pebbles Verse 1: Sitting here on a broken road, In the ashes of flames from long ago, I watch a blazin' sun of the afternoon, Say goodnight__ And when the ...

Well I'm writing a superhero novel and the title is What Heroes Are Made Of. I think it's rather good because it allows me to really present my themes and ...

I raised my right eyebrow. "Did not." "Hero?" asked a pale faced girl. She looked familiar... she was on Facebook. Her name came to my head just as she exclaimed, ...

Gravity Verse 1: Every time our eyes make contact, Secret messages convey, Our feelings and emotions so dense, There's gravity Chorus 1 Gravity, there's gravity... Gravity, there's___ gravity. Verse 2

We all are, Bolt. Okay, let's all have a start on finding Nate. --- Date: ...er- I forgoted? I was there when Firestarter told us about Nate's disappearance. I wasn't, ...

In the News Today: In the News today, A baby was born, Smiled his first smile, And his giggle made the doctor grin Temperature's are high, So two kids ran ...

The sun set in the western blue, Bidding farewell to the pink hues In the park, a couple danced Oh what songs they sang. It was a beautiful day, to ...

Hi! Welcome Pinto. I'm gonna call you Toyota, okay :) My teacher made up, for a maths' demonstration, the Toyota Pinto. Hey, noticed you weren't good with titles :) maybe ...

Bolt, that comment of yours did wonders for the story book! --- Ktg was showing me around the house and I had found my room. There was a note on ...

"They're really crazy people over there in America," said Mr van Royen. "Yes, sir," I replied, double checking my suitcase. He felt a compulsive need to speak Afrikaans, maybe he ...

Okay! Let's start. Kick it off with an exciting introduction to your character. Maybe make a few friends. Three posts and we'll move on (Three posts each that is ;) ...

This is the viewpoint of a Phoenix? I thought that was metaphorical!

*LIKED* This was very deep, there was one grammar mistake: gave should be give. I think you could explore the sleeping for money thing. Was it to help someone or ...

*LIKED* This was very deep. There were two points that could've been improved upon: All I see is Daddy on the floor Blood is spreading more Knife in his back ...