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Heya, Hero here! Cool avatar by the way :D Alright, I have to say that this poem failed to get me down. I hope that was your aim. And no, ...

Heya. I liked this but it felt very light and lacked a... what's the right word? Genre? In other words I couldn't tell what age group this was targeted at. ...

Heya, Hero here for a review. So I can only really say that I didn't understand this poem. I am quite horrible at understanding more than one thing at a ...

*Being Editted to be Less Offensive & Thanks for all the reviews! :P Until then!*

I disagree, CardDragon :P The rhyming wouldn't have done much, but it could have done something. I say that only because of your last stanza. Nice rhyme. I think this ...

I don't think this poem was up to what it could be. So many people rattle away about memories but I think you were getting at something. While I understand ...

This was awesome and it should've been featured... if only you edit it first. Alright, in a recent review I told someone that rhythm was an important aspect in free ...

Hm... differing from the crowd here. I'm sorry g, but I don't think that was well presented. Firstly, until I read the reviews, I wasn't too sure if it was ...

Heya, TheNewHero here to review... I really am not sure that you portatryed this poem well. Asp.Author, can you write a sentence or two about exactly what this poem is ...

Mr Knightley's post made me think of something. Perhaps if Jesus had done all that, we'd be grovelling still today, right (Drawing camels from the sand). But in fifty years ...

Tell your eight year old daughter that she could write her own Calvin & Hobbes. I think the best thing to do is to keep her stories short though, preserve ...

Heya, I'm TheNewHero! How about I review your poem today? My general impression of this poem was that it was bland. Basically you were just asking questions. I couldn't figure ...

I can see this crystal clear lake, Like a tear from God's Own Eye, I can feel this chilling wind, Like Adam's first breath, The flowers smell like orange blossom, ...

I disagree, Nem. If there was some kind of field obstructing all the scanning stuff... Smex, I'm not hooked. You need to up this... up. :arrow: Firstly, your title Your ...

And in case anyone else is wondering... I did not come on here with the intent of replacing hero :P It just so happened that I read Micheal Carrol's The ...