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The Awakening In the dark tomb, There is but one sound, Duhduh, buhduh, Of a heartbeat Then the blood begins to flow, His breath quickens, He's hyperventilating, Cold sweat beads ...

Yeah, Snoink, by convincing her to join your evil army. And yes, I am organizing a resistance... maybe Bolt can lead? Heya, Hero here! I'm gonna Like this. Why? Because ...

Hey thanks BenFranks, Abigail_W! I think I still have to get to what your saying with the punctuation because it looks weird when only some lines have commas whilst others ...

Thank you everybody for your comments. I will definetely take them into consideration. Sorry for being so late with the thank you message. So mainly what I get is that ...

Curses. Months late. TheNewHero, I got upset with you because I had already explained that to you once. Yet, you didn't respond to what I said at all; instead, you ...

I hate this and have no good feedback, therefore I will not comment. Sorry, I just had to make a joke from that. In reality I really think this was ...

Dear New Member Dear New Member, Please live up to my expectations, I'm packing up and going elsewhere, Leaving a vacancy for you to fill, So when you write your ...

Dear friend, You say that your life is tough, You ramble on in stanzas, And break down in song, And at the banshee's midnight cry, You sit awake and draw ...

That Can't Be Jesus, Where's the Crown? I look back in time to Jerusalem, Encompassed by a wall as thick as the earth, The fire of God burns as candle-light, ...

Hm... this was near perfect. I think you need to work on getting focus. I especially liked your line about looking in the mirror. I think the best thing to ...

Perfect. Only one thing to say. You made the same little mistake that irritated me about the Percy books. Something that cost it perfection! Along with Maximum Ride and Daniel ...

Heya, hero here. Vast, thanks for the nitpicking :D Alright, first thing. I don't know if you chose lyric format at the bottom but to be honest I can't stand ...

Hero here, hear Hero! I think this was rather nice. Let me say that it's quite hard to review bad poetry, contrary to belief, or at least in my opinion. ...

To make a play on the above reviewers name, that was SImply the Best! Ba, pa, pa, paaa. Better than all the rest! Ba,pa,ba,ba... This is really what I feel ...

*LIKES* First ever poet? Really? Make sure you get better, you'll be having twenty-eight likes by your twelfth poem. I'm not entirely sure what to make of this poem. I ...