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The epitome of humanity, and YWS. That even primates and felines can get along. :P Awesomeness

Hey, Hero here to review as requested. You might want to sit down, this will be long :D You don't have to read through it all at once, but don't ...

*Daniel Shaw Voice* Muhaha...

I once threatened to chase my grandmother out of the house when she started bossing everyone around XD

Raw Anger!

I remember the friend system. And guestbook. (But that doesn't have a ring to it, and if you like it you should put a ring on it.)

Absolutely love this. Only suggestion is to add some imagery. Setting helps define atmosphere. Otherwise, awesome. I *Like* it (Next to where it says Like on YWS, one of those ...

This was, in the end, simply average. It wasn't overly amazing or terribly bad. And that's because of several things: The Bad :arrow: The Narrator The Narrator was a little ...

Thanks Jash, Silent. I was experimenting with something BenFranks had told me and I feel punctuation helps the poem by giving it more breaks, etc. I s'pose if I'm going ...

Thanks, Ktg17, always nice to get positive feedback. Thanks to everyone who *Likes* and likes the poem. Thanks Shiney, you hit it right on the bell with the prayer thing, ...

Her piercing cries once filled the African night, And her teardrops wet the dry ground, But hardened hearts don't listen, And so. He fought and kicked and has the scars ...

One year, baby! Also, the changes to Pages and certain people in my followers tab... I was really surprised by them (Snoink, Nate, Lumi...) MeanMrMustard joining :D But really, there ...

Wow. Just... wow? Rapid floding of info. I was struggling to keep up with how fast it was written! :D

...And the ground caved in, between where we were standing_______ --- Hey there, I know you'll enjoy it here. So what do you like writing most?

A Sunrise for God The ocean gently overlaps itself, Eternal, warm Indian Ocean, It is a humid Christmas, And I'm painting, God's gift. There is nothing He loves more, (Oh ...