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Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
After all these years... TheNewHero, back in action.
Jan 2, 2020 -
Re: Breastfeeding in public
Stella totally has it. Having lived in various small towns in different African countries myself I concur: it's really not that big a deal. Surprising that there's even debate about ...
Jan 13, 2015 -
Re: Which element are you aligned with?
Earth seems like a firm, incredibly powerful character with perhaps the most devastating abilities and unbreakable defenses and yet has a very fundamental and easily exploitable weakness. Reminds me o
Jul 5, 2013 -
Re: Education
I know the original question seemed to emphasize more on the technicalities of the schools, but I don't know much about that. Here in SA we have our private schools ...
Jan 29, 2013 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Roar. I'm back after nearly a good year of absence. And this time I plan to actually write again. Remember me?
Mar 11, 2012 -
Re: Have you ever met a YWSer?
Well I'm stalking some but yeah...
Dec 26, 2011 -
Re: A Play of Roses: Chapter 3
This piece had a few 'winning' moments for me: "You really are a child, aren't you?" He asked Dresden with a voice of impetuousness. Winning! ...pretended that he was not ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Tell a joke
I have a dirty joke... mud. Also, what's brown and sticky? A stick. :P
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: The 9/11 Attacks Saved My Life
Hi, NewHero. Here to do a review. Hopefully I can help you improve this already quite good work. First of all I want to tell you how stellar your descriptions ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: A Play of Roses
Hey man! TheNewHero here to review your work. Firstly I have to say that I loved it. It was, as the previous reviewer said, a bit on the predictable side ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Putting an end
Well after those reviews I'm just another drop spilled. Anyway, I felt this was a really good piece. Especially the ending. Just a few things to complain about. Specifically: :arrow: ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: This Godly Orphan. Chapter 2, part 2
Personally I'm still in love with your storytelling. It's simple and effective - I especially love the twist ending. Your writing style is beautiful as well and you've nailed originality ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: From Here on Out
I hear you indian... I originally intended to make it mimick the motion of snakes moving through a large field to get the image of what it actually is like ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: From Here on Out
Thanks for the comments - properly edited.
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: The Mocking Thief
Hi, NewHero here to review. I gave your piece of star, but I honestly thinks it needs quite a bit of refining. But first and most obviously, it should be ...
Sep 18, 2011