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After all these years... TheNewHero, back in action.

Stella totally has it. Having lived in various small towns in different African countries myself I concur: it's really not that big a deal. Surprising that there's even debate about ...

Earth seems like a firm, incredibly powerful character with perhaps the most devastating abilities and unbreakable defenses and yet has a very fundamental and easily exploitable weakness. Reminds me o

I know the original question seemed to emphasize more on the technicalities of the schools, but I don't know much about that. Here in SA we have our private schools ...

Roar. I'm back after nearly a good year of absence. And this time I plan to actually write again. Remember me?

Well I'm stalking some but yeah...

This piece had a few 'winning' moments for me: "You really are a child, aren't you?" He asked Dresden with a voice of impetuousness. Winning! ...pretended that he was not ...

I have a dirty joke... mud. Also, what's brown and sticky? A stick. :P

Hi, NewHero. Here to do a review. Hopefully I can help you improve this already quite good work. First of all I want to tell you how stellar your descriptions ...

Hey man! TheNewHero here to review your work. Firstly I have to say that I loved it. It was, as the previous reviewer said, a bit on the predictable side ...

Well after those reviews I'm just another drop spilled. Anyway, I felt this was a really good piece. Especially the ending. Just a few things to complain about. Specifically: :arrow: ...

Personally I'm still in love with your storytelling. It's simple and effective - I especially love the twist ending. Your writing style is beautiful as well and you've nailed originality ...

I hear you indian... I originally intended to make it mimick the motion of snakes moving through a large field to get the image of what it actually is like ...

Thanks for the comments - properly edited.

Hi, NewHero here to review. I gave your piece of star, but I honestly thinks it needs quite a bit of refining. But first and most obviously, it should be ...