Lollipopper

Hey, I gotta do this quickly. Let my typing skills come in handy at this moment! I like the story. Just like the first, I liked the idea. But in ...

Alright, so...I liked this. It was interesting and the prologue caught me. But there are a lot of grammatical errors. One--you switch between the past and present views. For example, ...

Hey Forest queen...I really liked this. I've always liked the story of Robin Hood, and the way you brought a new world with his, I really enjoyed this. You were ...

Hello, Dragons. I think that there was a pretty good plot line in this, but the punctuation was horrible. I'm sorry--It was just so hard to understand when sentences went ...

Whoa, dude, I like this. The most prominent feature about this is thevery beginning--it pulls you in. Simple. That's all I have to say:) --Lollipopper

Like Rachel said, this was a very traditional fantasy tale. First off--I love fantasy. That is where my core lies. And second--most people can't resist MORE fantasy. I mean, how ...

Hmm, I think I liked this. There has obviously been some serious work devoted to the story. Overall, I liked it. I think I'm being to picky or maybe it's ...

I like this! Sometimes it was a little hard with the grammar mistakes and everything, but just polish it up a little and it's good as new. That's all I ...

Ooh, I really liked this. I love how you started it out. At first I was like "whaa..?" but it caught my attention. Then it said that he was playing ...

I don't know if this has been done yet, but it's a good way to get music passed around. The title says it all! Listen to the song that the ...

Or... (I don't know if this has been said yet) Man, that was ill! Flip is another word. Like "Oh, flip!"

So, I've been working on my novel for awhile now, and it's 1st person point of view. Lately I have been realizing that there is so much more to the ...

Whooaah! I don't know if it's too late to say what I need to say...But I REALLY liked this! It was very entertaining and super funny. I really liked the ...

Hey, my name is Sierra! :) I don't do grammatical editing--just overall advice. I think it was pretty good, but if this is the very beginning of a book, I ...

Yeah, music can sometimes inspire me to write, too. But usually I can't listen to music with lyrics because I'll start TYPING the lyrics in my story! That does NOT ...