Lollipopper

Hey! Lollipopper here to review. This piece was very short, might I say. I mean, seems like a prologue or something, so that's fine, but the point is there isn't ...

Hey SuperSquirrel, here to review. Basically, I think your story has a captivating feel to it and I encourage you to do more. I like the exciting post-Apocalyptic feel to ...

Hey, Lollipopper here to investigate. Okay, generally, I liked this piece! Well paced with good information and detail. But I think there are a few issues here. Gah, I don't ...

Gah, this was amazing! You're a great poet. That's all I can say. --Lollipopper

Hey senorita! Lollipopper here to investigate. Overall, I love the idea of this story. I am NOT a romance person and this even caught MY eye. Doesn't happen much. But...I ...

Hey firevirthral, I am really liking your avvie! Is it a phoenix? I love phoenixes. Okay, I actually really liked this. It gave just enough information to leave the reader ...

Hey, DarkRain. You know, that's a pretty epic name. Overall, this piece was interesting and I think the idea is very gripping. I would be interested in reading this if ...

Hey, funkypanda. I like the name. Overall, this story was okay. It was quite depressing and deprived of life. I could see it turning into something a lot bigger with ...

Hi again:) Great job on this! You're writing improved by ten-fold in just one chapter. Plenty of description! The only two things I could pick out was that it is ...

Hola senorita! Sorry it took so long :/ Okay, dang...must I say, I'm loving your style of writing. Descriptive, elaborate--but still clear. And this story is so fricken feels like ...

Hey, lovethelife! Thanks for sharing this piece with us. Usually I don't do romance, but once in a while, a girl has to cave in. Who doesn't like beautiful angel-like ...

Hey beginningtowrite! Thanks for the story! Overall, I like the idea of this. Mysterious guy, feuding friends...Please continue with this! Just a couple things: To me it seemed like this ...

Hey, Cairo! Back again as I promised:) Okay, wow! This was great. Diego is really funny. I love his character already forming. I also like the mystery of this all. ...

Wow, I just looked at a few of the pictures of you gorgeous people, and for a moment I thought I was on the Abercrombie & Fitch site! Haha:) Isn't ...

Hello, xoCairo! Thanks for posting this. I love fantasy stories. I don't like to get down to the nitty-gritty, I just like the plain overview. Here goes-- I think this ...