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Re: The Need[1]
Thank you both for reviewing my work! :D Bah, my eyes tend to skip over things that could be easily changed to fit correctly. For example, tenses. I do have ...
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: The Need[1]
Thank you for your review! :) I knew I did something wrong with the tenses, I just couldn't put my finger on it. Also, yeah, the spelling mistake was my ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Gimme a Cupcake and I'll Give you a Review
It would be wonderful if you could review the first chapter of my new story, 'The Need'. ^.^ If you don't want to to, you know, you don't have to. ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Run through water
First I'm just going to sum it up a bit: This poem definitely put images into my mind. The way you made your words flow helped the poem develop pictures. ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Jinx
I saw this the other day, and decided to pick it up for a light read. It turned out to be pretty good, since to tell the truth, I don't ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: The Need[1]
March 12, 2008 My skin is dry. I feel it hang off the bones, shedding off my fragile features. I can't breathe. My windpipe... oh, my breath is taken away ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Do you write worse in your main characters POV than others?
I tend to go through that problem a lot, too. I wouldn't suggest spending too much time worrying about it, or you'll end up doing what I do; ditch the ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Cliched plot or cliched characters?
I honestly don't mind a cliched plot. While cliched plots are easily saved by fantastic characters, cliched characters can not be saved by a fantastic plot in my opinion.
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Fonts
I use Times New Roman, but that's only because I'm too lazy to change it. Hah. If I remember to change it, I usually use Perpetua. :)
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: How to drop large bit of information
Thank you! I think I'm going to do that. ^.^
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Short, tends to wear a lot of plaid shirts and jeans. Ginger hair. And I thought of a rainbow purse. Dunno why.
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: How to drop large bit of information
My character already knows that she is. Actually, she's not really an incarnation on anyone in particular, she's supposed to be living Karma. As in, you know, she hands out ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: How to drop large bit of information
In my story, I need to tell the reader a large bit of info, more specifically that she's a reincarnation of a sort. I want to tell the reader this ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Inspiration Wanted
I suffered from writer's block for around four months, and recently haven broken that wall. Back when I had it, I had no inspiration and everything I churned out sounded ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Face Maker
That's a lot of fun to mess with. ^.^
Jan 28, 2009
