LolitaRose

Hello. :) Thanks for deciding to click on my story. I don't know if you can tell my the title or not, but this is only the first part of ...

I hit novel. because, well, I am sorta working on one, if I could actually get focused. :oops: It's a about post apocalyptic vampires. Should be fun. :D

The House of Night series by Pc Cast and Kristen Cast. Could not stand these books at all. I'm pretty open to books, even those that many others haven't enjoyed. ...

YES! THANK YOU! /end capslock abuse I completely suck at editing, and this guide has helped me SO much. :)

Hello! :) The Butterfly Effect flashing across solar system’s planes * First off, wonderful name. Fits nicely. * I believe there should be a 'the' before solar system, yes? :D ...

That was sweet! I found the rhyming perfectly understandable, and easily flowing. I'm sure the girl this was written for will enjoy it. That is, if your sister chooses to ...

Oh...crap. I've read plenty of decent teen novels, I just have a hard time remembering them... Oh! 'Twisted' by Laurie Hale Anderson(I believe that's her name?) was quite good. It ...

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I'll try to pop in for sure. :D

If you need one more person, I'll be perfectly fine with doing it. :)

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I can help you with the clothing. First of all, I suggest for male clothing you either look up Dr.Steel on Youtube or Google. He's a singer, in a sense, ...

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