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Re: The Apprentice FINAL!!!
Ye, I entirely agree :P Sir Alan has to be my favourite entrepreneur :-)
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
I thought this might be fun. Basically, I give you a word, and you have to write the first thing that comes into your mind, you have twenty seconds from ...
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Re: My Brother Has A Gun
Well, I think Incandescence was a little harsh, but he's half right. I'm no expert at poetry, but I will do my best: Firstly, ask yourself what it is about ...
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Re: Machinations #1 (part 2)
Hi Kylan! Beside him, the older couple were talking softly between themselves, I find this a little tame—I struggle with the passive voice that seems to slow down the pace, ...
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Re: Heroes Icons
Hehe :-) I think this should be rated R. That aside, nice lil' pics! I understand these weren't meant to be too serious, but I am... 1) I think it ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: A Feeble Attempt
Hey HC! That was a nice little poem. Firstly, let me just point out that you don't need to have a capital letter at the start of each line, just ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: The Apprentice FINAL!!!
I think it was just that she was questioning why she was there--which is fine in my opinion, they all did, except she said it out loud. I guess I ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Brisingr (Eragon 3) Spoiler
Bluntly? I hate Paolini. Wouldn't it be funny? We all make fake fanmail, e.g.: Dear Mr Paolini, I just finished reading "Eragon" I must say I am very impressed. I ...
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Re: Lunar Eclipse
Wow, that is lovely! But ye, I would suggest cropping down a lot of the black, so it is more focused and I can see the image better :P I'm ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Hey
Hehe! You people are annoyingly friendly (in a very good way)! :D
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: A YWS sorrority/ fraternity
It a brotherhood or a sisterhood within a certain club or group of people. Lol, sounds like some evil ritual thing :-P
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: The Apprentice FINAL!!!
Ye. I was saddened by both Raef and Simon's departures. Then again, I think Lee deserved it. Helene had no chance. Sir Alan didn't like Alex, I think. He had ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: The YWS Apostrophe?
This is annoying me. Since I saw "Young Writers Society" I have been pondering on where on Earth the apostrophe goes! I was looking for some old posts for the ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
This book was a book--not a good book, not a bad book, just a book, but then you opened it and I realised it must be very bad.
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Exactly Seven Months Later...
So that's an average of... 550 words a day :shock: I struggle to get half that! Anyhow, congrats and I am sure it will be a great success!
Jun 11, 2008
