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Re: Removed
Hmm. This is pretty deep stuff. I see you put a lot of effort into this. I have a few things I think you might have missed. I hope this ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: Final Destination chapter 7 {editing}
You have great ideas bouncing around in your head, no doubt about that. I love your writing style. There are only a few things I need to point out, and ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: War is heaven (and heaven) Chapter 1-3
Okay, First some criticizing "The humans are making decisions on wither to serve a god who has protected them for most there lives or a harsh demon who promises them ...
Jun 22, 2014