Logan455

Good when i started reading and i saw that half of your story was just a description of a troll i was sort of like what? but now that i ...

i liked your poem a lot it felt go to speak came off my lips smoothly i do think there was one place where it fell dead of awkward for ...

i liked it, but i am not much of a poet so i really don't know much about the way the words are supposed to flow or anything but i ...

well the writing was good it flowed well and all pleasing to read you could say, but i thought it was lacking i mean it really was a "short" story ...