Logan101

hey that was an amazing story i loved the way you write its alot better then most of the things on hear. what i liked the most was the first ...

hi i hope i wont be being to critical but i thought that this story was strange and to short to revel anthing about your writting skills you should make ...

im sorry i dident like it vary much but thanks for posting

Intro The man who said what does not kill us makes us stronger was wrong. It is the year 2500 and the third world war engulfed the world destroying almost ...

i am sorry but i thoght that the over all story line was sort of strange but it was prettly well writen you should definatly keep writing but i think ...

it was vary well writen but i dident realy like the story ine at all so what im trying to get at is that you should keep writing just get ...

hello i liked the begening and where you were going with it but i dont see any real good work hear becase i think most people as myself like where ...

i think that the stye of the writing was great but overall the it looks like you just but a bunch of ajictives together about seasons sorry

i liked the style of the writing

i liked it