LlamaDuck

I hate the cold before the rain, But love the rain itself. I love to rest in bed when sick, But hate the ill of health. I love the scent ...

White Stallions. I watch the beauty of the stallions of the sea Flaring manes and whip tails, Their sound fills the empty sky. Bold hearts gallop onwards Some are lost ...

Wow i really liked this, it was strange and made me think. Here are my favourite parts... Long he stood and pondered on what he thought was true. The past ...

Hey, LlamaDuck here. Sorry for this... I am always near you but alas, Nice line! You do not see, feel, smell or hear me. This felt a bit long I ...

Wow!

Hmm! Okay a bit short, not that there is anything wrong with it it's a lovely piece full of good description and words I'm not to sure I know the ...

Wow! As you can tell I really liked this poem and I'm a little creeped out by it...I'm guessing that was the idea. Your darkest dreams will never be, far ...

The Others They see blood upon my hands And guilt upon my face, But what they cannot see is that I was wrongly placed. They do not care for friends ...

A few small catches... I woke up in the and climbed out of bed, I think you missed a word... I went into our shower, the floors were dirty. How ...

Just a few things, here you say Aaron's hair is brown... she could see the tip of Aaron’s baseball cap, jammed tight over his head of brown hair. ...and all ...

I've made some changes, they're not briliant but i'm not shakespear. (no matter how much i wish i was)

Facing the truth He’d been expecting someone. I knew that the moment he’d answered the door, the thumb of his right hand bandaged. I'd pointed this out and he told ...

Just one thing... The way they argued... you'd think they were fighting the war I think this should say 'you'd think they were still fighting' So now i wonder... who ...

Love the poem but I just felt like saying a few things (sorry about this). It's on the streets, In people you meet, Even in those heartless souls. - Like ...

Any suggestion to replace 'stunningly' I know it's an adverb and I'm not to fond of them either but 'He looked up at the Christmas tree' seemed too blunt. Help ...