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Re: Bloody Money: Chapter One (working title)
This is a very interesting novel thus far! I've always been a fan of assassins and such. Overall, this was well written, short of some grammatical errors, which can easily ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The End: Chapter Two
CHAPTER TWO “Karra, look,” Estele pointed at a faraway object in the distance. I took out my scope and surveyed the dark thing. It wasn’t usual to see people around ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: My Hero? Chapter 2
This chapter was just as enjoyable as the last one! But I did find some mistakes that I think should be corrected. This part: "Not all knights wear armor any ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Harmony
This is very beautiful. I love poetry so much that a lot of times I just can't see anything wrong with any of it. It doesn't have to rhyme, or ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: My Hero? Chapter 1
I very much so enjoyed reading this! It's lighthearted and funny. However, this piece has a lot of grammer mistakes and it doesn't seem to go very in-depth with what's ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: The End: Chapter One
CHAPTER ONE When I was a little girl I thought that the world would live forever. That nothing could destroy it or hurt it. Never did I imagine or even ...
Jun 23, 2011
