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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Bloody Money: Chapter One (working title)

    This is a very interesting novel thus far! I've always been a fan of assassins and such. Overall, this was well written, short of some grammatical errors, which can easily ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The End: Chapter Two

    CHAPTER TWO “Karra, look,” Estele pointed at a faraway object in the distance. I took out my scope and surveyed the dark thing. It wasn’t usual to see people around ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: My Hero? Chapter 2

    This chapter was just as enjoyable as the last one! But I did find some mistakes that I think should be corrected. This part: "Not all knights wear armor any ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Harmony

    This is very beautiful. I love poetry so much that a lot of times I just can't see anything wrong with any of it. It doesn't have to rhyme, or ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: My Hero? Chapter 1

    I very much so enjoyed reading this! It's lighthearted and funny. However, this piece has a lot of grammer mistakes and it doesn't seem to go very in-depth with what's ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The End: Chapter One

    CHAPTER ONE When I was a little girl I thought that the world would live forever. That nothing could destroy it or hurt it. Never did I imagine or even ...

    Jun 23, 2011


Vampires aren't real, but you know what is? And far more annoying? MOSQUITOS
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