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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Colorblind

    Hi. I really liked how you used first person in this. Some people have trouble doing it well, but you did a really good job. I agree that the reoccuring ...

    Dec 14, 2008
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Enough for the Two of Us.

    Hi! =] Nice job. It was a good idea, something we needed to see. I just think that sometimes you need to work on your word choice a little. Hermione ...

    Dec 14, 2008


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
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