Lizzical

This was originally somewhere else, so if you recognize it, that's why. Anyways, this is my first story on this site, so please don't be too harsh. ----------------------------------------------------

Hi. I really liked how you used first person in this. Some people have trouble doing it well, but you did a really good job. I agree that the reoccuring ...

Hi! =] Nice job. It was a good idea, something we needed to see. I just think that sometimes you need to work on your word choice a little. Hermione ...