Lizzard

Ha! For most of your bio, I was thinking we were very much alike but I love romance, but oh god, HATE twilight. I can't wait to read some of ...

Answers: I've been doing home schooling since I was seven. My mother only speaks french and had trouble helping me and understanding my grades so we started homeschooling. When I ...

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SOMETIMES, STAYING IN ONE PLACE for too long is the only way you can ever feel anything. Like the day I fell in love with Cal for the second time ...

Hello there, my name is Lizzard or A.L Lizzard. I am 14 going 52. I live in the U.K and I happen to be a member of the reptile species! ...

SOMETIMES, STAYING IN ONE PLACE for too long is the only way you can ever feel anything. Like the day I fell in love with Cal for the second time ...

The bell rang and students filled the hall. I pushed my way through them to the art room. Too jagged and not just for an opening sentence. Try rewording it ...

Hello., I'm Lizzard. I am 14. I live in Kent. I've been reading since the womb. Yes, I had a little book with me in there. Painful for mummy but ...

Author's note: My first writing work...well aside from screenplays. This is the first chapter of Nature of the Experiments. I'm not really sure if it's finished or not, hopefully you ...

I love your opening sentence but i feel you focused more on the physical descriptions of the character than the plot itself. Capturing prologue however. Again, great opening sentence.

I enjoyed your piece. It was confusing but not in a good way. I agree with all here. You should really play a bit more with the wording. But your ...